May I suggest an extension/alteration to your wording?
When a member disposes of address space using this transfer policy the
member should not be entitled to any further IPv4 allocations or
assigments from APNIC for a period of 24 months or until the "final /
8" assignment measures are implemented. In exceptional circumstances a
member can submit a comprehensive plan justifying an allocation. A
substantial processing fee may be charged and a notice of
application will
be posted for at least 7 days on the APNIC website.
