FYI for colleagues in the APNIC region. Izumi -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: CRISP Team comment on the 2nd draft of the SLA Date: Tue, 01 Sep 2015 08:50:41 +0900 From: Izumi Okutani <izumi@nic.ad.jp> To: ianaxfer@nro.net <ianaxfer@nro.net> Dear NRO, The CRISP Team appreciates the opportunity to review and comment on the 2nd draft of the SLA for the IANA Numbering Services. We believe the process of calling for comment for the 2nd draft, and a document with the comments received during the consultation period and the legal team responses demonstrates transparency in the process of preparing implementation of the proposal. We thank the RIR legal team and NRO EC for taking these steps. In reviewing the 2nd version of the SLA from the perspectives described below, the CRISP Team observe that the draft SLA is consistent with the number community proposal. - CRISP Team comment for SLA ver.1 are adequately addressed - No consistencies with the number community proposal over additional edits for SLA ver.2 Please see the attached document for details of the observation by the CRISP Team on the 2nd draft of the SLA. In terms of the process, we agree with the future steps described in the draft SLA as below: "All comments received by the deadline will be processed by the legal team of the RIRs and, as appropriate, included in a further and final draft of the SLA which will be presented to ICANN as the proposed final SLA. It is hoped that this document will be agreed by ICANN without further changes." Further, the CRISP Team expects the final SLA to remain consistent with the number community proposal, given consultation process has taken place, including feedback from the ICANN Board. The CRISP Team has confidence that the NRO maintains and continues the process to be accountable to the number community throughout the implementation, and expects the NRO to have clarity in the process for the number community, beyond negotiation with ICANN. Best Regards, Izumi Okutani, Nurani Nimpuno Chair and Vice Chair, the CRISP Team
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The CRISP Team comments on the Second Draft SLA.pdf
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